Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Book 08 Part II: Falldown

Still working through the Final Draft of Book 08 part 2, and I came to this line:

Insert vivid erotic dream about Specialist Brainiacsdaughter.

Got your attention now, I bet.

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Still working on Book 08 Part 2

I'm at about page 50. I'm concerned that this is shaping up to be another story like "Independence," without a plot so much as a series of things that happen. Maybe on the next pass-through I can make it more the story I wanted it to be. I wish the plot were stronger.

On the plus side, I've just written a passage involving Trajan Lear that is by far the most juvenile thing I've ever put into a WA story. I'm very proud of that.